Something in the way

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Oceantide
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Something in the way

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Deep inside my heart
Hunkered down in trenches
Row by row but hidden
Everyone’s alone

Some are feeling shock
Some are feeling angry
Some are feeling frightened
Some are feeling defiant

Something in the way
Mounds and mounds of dirt
Keeping us immobile
Dividing us from comrades
Scars
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i'm digging a trench to get to you
you won't always be alone

scars
A scar is the tattoo of a triumph to be proud of. It says the hurt is over and the wound is closed. It means you conquered the pain, learned a lesson, grew stronger, and moved forward. There is a beauty in my scars that I can see now.
Rosahope
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Re: Something in the way

Post by Rosahope »

Beautiful and sad!
Oceantide
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Re: Something in the way

Post by Oceantide »

you're making me cry, scars. it's good. I haven't been able to cry. and now I'm sobbing. a damn breaking....

Thank you, Rosahope. You are so sweet and kind.
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