Have fun whilst Ye stay,
Cause, Ye art Neer Welcome,
In this house
Or
World - All the Same...
Ken thyself lucky,
Cause, I am in hell Now,
What promise of AfterLife?
Pity this damned Soul,
Cause, though it Burns Within,
It heals and supports Without,
Cause, Broken is Beautiful...
_Burnwithin
(Funny Name, This life - All the same)
Burnwithin: Irony
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Re: Burnwithin: Irony
hi burnwithin,
your words are very poetic and meaningful. thank you for sharing.
your words are very poetic and meaningful. thank you for sharing.
You are stronger than you know.
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Re: Burnwithin: Irony
Where do we go when we are unwelcome? Life is living hell but then also light, brilliant promising, a twisted joke or irony. Is it like good cop bad cop? Is the good only there to make it worse, to break us? What do we do with ourselves when despite it all there is hope?
It's easy to break things But so precise, slow, masterful to heal, to mend. I love the gold the pure depth of spirit that forms in the cracks.
I think we go beyond hope or broken when we heal. It's the bravery of a single life taking root in rootlessness. Or a single leave that has become one with the wind. There are feelings beyond hope and broken. Sometimes I feel certain, in place, whole even... I see this in the end of your poem too, nestled in with agony and displacement.
Feeling with you.
Love,
EH
It's easy to break things But so precise, slow, masterful to heal, to mend. I love the gold the pure depth of spirit that forms in the cracks.
I think we go beyond hope or broken when we heal. It's the bravery of a single life taking root in rootlessness. Or a single leave that has become one with the wind. There are feelings beyond hope and broken. Sometimes I feel certain, in place, whole even... I see this in the end of your poem too, nestled in with agony and displacement.
Feeling with you.
Love,
EH
"One kind word can warm three winter months"
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Re: Burnwithin: Irony
burnwithin,
wow, thank you.
Cause, broken is beautiful.
wow, thank you.
Cause, broken is beautiful.
All women are beautiful. Period.
I deserve better than survival.
I deserve better than survival.
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Re: Burnwithin: Irony
Thank you for speaking so kindly, I feel its value cause my protectors did not. im just crying, god bless you fellows...
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