(Found this in an old diary)
Green leaves with white speckles
staring rudely at me what
am I supposed to say I shouldn't
censor my thoughts but my
thoughts are supposed to and
are meant to be private
god damn it
why am I here? I am
master at censoring what I
really want to say
I mean will I need to
share this page with anyone?
It's unsightly
It's blank
Like my insides
Which I hate
I don't want to write
anymore and it's only
been a minute or so
Damn pencil
I hate you
you exist and I do not
I'm just a lump of
self-hating mass
Thinking of Hemingway
and his cats
Pet peeve writing with too much space I want to fill it in
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ChipmunksRunFree
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Pet peeve writing with too much space I want to fill it in
Last edited by Jonesy on Sat Nov 07, 2015 2:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Changed NT to MT
Reason: Changed NT to MT
"A chipmunk for you..."
*plucks out the most beautiful flower and gives it to you - a baby chipmunk curled up and sleeping within its petals!...*
*plucks out the most beautiful flower and gives it to you - a baby chipmunk curled up and sleeping within its petals!...*
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lsnp
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Re: Pet peeve writing with too much space I want to fill it in
Dear ChipmunksRunFree,
I really like this poem in that it captures so many frustrations as well as the feeling of not being or maybe not wanting to be. These are things we share.
lsnp
I really like this poem in that it captures so many frustrations as well as the feeling of not being or maybe not wanting to be. These are things we share.
lsnp
Last edited by ajei on Sat Nov 07, 2015 9:18 am, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: changed trigger from MT to NT
Reason: changed trigger from MT to NT