When they say time will heal

[Shirongnl]

My hair used to shine
So long and black
Me etes used to sparkle
My legs built for running track
But after you broke me
I couldnt look at myself
Yoj took my innocence
And i put my trust on the shelf
I used to be like a doll
So lovely fresh and new
I used to love my life
Unfortunately then i met you
Now my hair is dull and tangled
Instead of sparkle my eyes are glazed
Instead of running track i began to smoke
I still wonder how you could be so depraved
Time will heal
That what they say
But nine years later
I sti hurt the same today

[Crow]

Hi Shirongnl,

This is good... sad, painful and emotive... but well written.

Crow

[Shirongnl]

Thabk you crow, I've been told to try writing due to my SH getting worse so hooing it helps.
It feels good creating something of my own.