You And Me

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roseglasses
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You And Me

Post by roseglasses »

Had therapy today and she said I should write some stuff out, and so I thought of this. Please excuse all the wrong punctuation, I'm just not that great with it.


You stole so much from me, I wonder if I’ll ever stop feeling the pain
You took my future and I don’t know how to navigate the waters
You are to blame, but I still blame myself
You are what was wrong, yet it’s still on me
I am not strong, yet I am not weak
I am not okay and yet I’m not going under
You stole from me, but I am not done.
You are strong enough to face it all, even if it doesn't feel like it right now.
Crow
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Re: You And Me

Post by Crow »

Hi roseglasses,

I feel your pain in the beginning of your words. But I also see your hope and determination towards the end.
I have found since writing at the start of this year that it helps me to work through memories and feelings.
Hold onto that hope that I see.

Crow
A little boy hides in an adult's disguise.
Quote taken from an original poem that I have written.
roseglasses
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Re: You And Me

Post by roseglasses »

Thank you so much!

I didn't do a whole bunch of copies and changed or fixed, I just did the one, and changed as I read it, I was afraid if I did too many edits, I would lose the courage to post it.
You are strong enough to face it all, even if it doesn't feel like it right now.
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