An unforgotten time

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Crow
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An unforgotten time

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An unforgotten time

Aggressive shouting,
Violent hands,
Anxious child,
Familiar lands,

Whatever my age,
Toddler or teen,
Control and fear,
Shouldn't have been,

The memories won't fade,
And scars will remain,
Etched in my mind,
I remember the pain.
A little boy hides in an adult's disguise.
Quote taken from an original poem that I have written.
Chessgirl
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Re: An unforgotten time

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Simple and to the point. Beautiful and sad.
Chessgirl
Crow
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Re: An unforgotten time

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Thank you. :)
A little boy hides in an adult's disguise.
Quote taken from an original poem that I have written.
there
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Re: An unforgotten time

Post by there »

I agree with Chessgirl.
Creativity is a healer.
All women are beautiful. Period.
I deserve better than survival.
Crow
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Re: An unforgotten time

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Thank you there, I appreciate you commenting. :)
A little boy hides in an adult's disguise.
Quote taken from an original poem that I have written.
coconuts
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Re: An unforgotten time

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So sorry for your pain it never should have been. I wish you healing and that these memories fade. The burdens eased. It's not fair you carry it.
Be the Light 🌟 in someone's night.
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