I’m still working on this one. Just wanted to get an idea down
Stares off
Head in fog
Floating away
China doll
Child paused
I went away
They did this
Growth delay
Parents there
Honor them
Bible says
Don’t be grim
Here I am
They are gone
All grown up
Fate drawn
China Doll
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China Doll
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Re: China Doll
Chessgirl,
I'd love to see an aquarell of this. Can picture China Girl floating far away until she gets to a safe shore where she can come out of the water to finally grow skin and flesh. This is really good.
Kokoschka
I'd love to see an aquarell of this. Can picture China Girl floating far away until she gets to a safe shore where she can come out of the water to finally grow skin and flesh. This is really good.
Kokoschka
..but god bless the child that's got his own... (Billie Holiday)
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Re: China Doll
Lovely, Chessgirl. Thank you for sharing, I liked this and the feelings you put across in it. :)
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Thank you for this Chessgirl,
It paints an image that is soft yet sad.
Nll
It paints an image that is soft yet sad.
Nll
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Re: China Doll
I echo these thoughts above.
Crow
Crow
A little boy hides in an adult's disguise.
Quote taken from an original poem that I have written.
Quote taken from an original poem that I have written.
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Re: China Doll
Thank you everyone! It feels unfinished but still, you all made me feel better about what I have down so far!
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Re: China Doll
Chessgirl,
I really see and feel this! Thanks for sharing it.
I really see and feel this! Thanks for sharing it.
All women are beautiful. Period.
I deserve better than survival.
I deserve better than survival.
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