No name yet, but I'll take suggestions!

For all members who enjoy writing poetry or who use poetry to express their strongest emotions.
Please be advised this area can be triggering, so read cautiously.

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Byby
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No name yet, but I'll take suggestions!

Post by Byby » Sun Feb 09, 2020 3:47 am

They say anger runs hot,
like solar flares, all chaos and energy.
But when I feel anger it spreads like winter
A thick layer of ice, numb fingers and cold, painful breaths.
Until everything is silent enough to be dead.

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Re: No name yet, but I'll take suggestions!

Post by coconuts » Sun Feb 09, 2020 3:02 pm

Interesting perspective but I totally understand. I never thought of it that's way before but it is rather fitting.

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Re: No name yet, but I'll take suggestions!

Post by Byby » Sun Feb 09, 2020 11:58 pm

Thank you! I used to write poetry a lot, and even made it into a workshop with some published authors, but then the pressure made me sort of block up, and I haven't written anything in over a decade. I was very happy to see this poetry section here so I can just freely write without worrying about making it publishable.
I'm happy you could relate to my little wisp of a poem :)

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