When they say time will heal

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Shirongnl
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When they say time will heal

Post by Shirongnl » Mon Apr 12, 2021 6:13 pm

My hair used to shine
So long and black
Me etes used to sparkle
My legs built for running track
But after you broke me
I couldnt look at myself
Yoj took my innocence
And i put my trust on the shelf
I used to be like a doll
So lovely fresh and new
I used to love my life
Unfortunately then i met you
Now my hair is dull and tangled
Instead of sparkle my eyes are glazed
Instead of running track i began to smoke
I still wonder how you could be so depraved
Time will heal
That what they say
But nine years later
I sti hurt the same today

Crow
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Re: When they say time will heal

Post by Crow » Mon Apr 12, 2021 6:28 pm

Hi Shirongnl,

This is good... sad, painful and emotive... but well written.

Crow
From pain comes a courage
The strength from injustice

Quote taken from The Rage To Overcome by Machine Head

Shirongnl
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Re: When they say time will heal

Post by Shirongnl » Mon Apr 12, 2021 9:51 pm

Thabk you crow, I've been told to try writing due to my SH getting worse so hooing it helps.
It feels good creating something of my own.

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